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57 pages 1 hour read

Danielle Evans

The Office of Historical Corrections

Fiction | Short Story Collection | Adult | Published in 2020

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“Richard of York Gave Battle in Vain” Summary

Content Warning: This story contains domestic and gun violence.

Dori has designed her wedding around the colors of the rainbow, and she contemplates how to incorporate Noah’s Ark. At the bachelorette party, the bridesmaids—who are each dressed in an assigned color of the rainbow—go to local bars.

Rena, a good friend of the groom, JT, goes to the bachelorette party, but she has an uncomfortable relationship with Dori. She met JT five years earlier in Ghana when they were quarantined together after threats of biological warfare on their plane. As two of the only Americans on the plane, Rena and JT bonded. Now, Rena can’t shake the feeling that Dori distrusts her. She believes that Dori assumes something romantic happened between Rena and JT in their past.

Rena sneaks away from the bachelorette party early. Back at her hotel, she runs into Michael, one of the groomsmen. The two talk and end up sleeping together in his hotel room. Rena wonders if this might make Dori feel better since it would show she’s not interested in JT.

As Rena sleeps in Michael’s bed, she has nightmares about her sister, Elizabeth. Rena was the maid of honor at Elizabeth’s wedding to their childhood friend, Connor. A year later, Connor saw a repair man leaving their home and assumed that Elizabeth was cheating on him. He shot her in the head, and while she survived, she has brain damage. Rena has not visited Elizabeth in the hospital in three years. She knows from her mother that Elizabeth is slowly making progress toward speech.

At 4:00 am, Rena leaves Michael’s bed, afraid that she will wake up screaming from her nightmares. In the hallway, she sees JT getting into the elevator with a duffel bag. He tells her that he cannot go through with the wedding. Rena thinks of Dori and how excited she has been about the wedding and attempts to stop JT. He insults her, saying that he used to think she was brave but now thinks that she has “nothing in [her] life” (34). Angry, she decides to let him leave.

The following morning, Dori comes to Rena’s room and tells her that JT is gone. Dori scans the room looking for signs of JT, as if Rena might be responsible. When Dori asks where he went, Rena lies and says that JT planned on going to a cabin in Ohio. Dori makes Rena drive with her on the three-hour trip from Indiana to Ohio.

On the drive, Dori is hostile at first, but she relaxes when she sees a text from Michael on Rena’s phone asking about last night. Rena says that something could happen between her and Michael, thinking about how a relationship that started because of Dori’s wedding would make Dori happy.

Rena thinks about her love life. After several failed relationships, she actively pursued married men and dangerous one-night stands. She believed that there must be something “unlovable” about her and sought to ruin others’ relationships without remorse. She admits to herself that she would have had sex with JT—they shared a bed in quarantine but did nothing sexual—but she didn’t “because the circumstances were so strange” (40). Lately, Rena finds that she holds less anger toward men and is more forgiving. She has realized that they, too, are “broken.”

Rena and Dori get breakfast at a rest stop. A man in McDonald’s notices Dori’s “Bride” T-shirt and asks about her wedding, but Dori makes up a story about them being in a band called “Bride.” Rena joins her, and they invent names, show dates, and an entire tour for their fake band. When they get back to the car, Rena confesses that she lied about knowing where JT is. She admits that the address she gave Dori is her sister’s old house.

On the drive back, Rena assumes that Dori is angry or embarrassed. However, Dori drives them to a water park. Rena tries to apologize, but Dori does not say anything, instead leading her to a line for the tallest waterslide. Rena is nervous about the slide’s height on the way up, but on the way down, she feels “genuine joy.”

When Rena checks her phone, she has messages from JT, who has gone back to the hotel and wants to go through with the wedding. She shows Dori, but Dori shrugs it off, and they put their phones back into their lockers. The two spend the rest of the day at the park, eating food and floating in a wave pool. Dori buys a photo of the two of them on the waterslide with the caption “Wish You Were Here.”

Rena is happy at the water park, and she thinks about how long it has been since she did something like this. She remembers how happy Elizabeth was when they went to a water park as children.

“Richard of York Gave Battle in Vain” Analysis

The story contains two alternating timelines—one in the present and one in the past—that are separate throughout the text until the final lines. Through flashbacks, Rena remembers her sister, Elizabeth, and her near-death at her husband’s hands, as well as her unwillingness to visit Elizabeth in the hospital. In the present, she attends JT’s wedding-related events while noticing Dori’s distrust of her. The separation of these timelines conveys the theme of Running from Versus Reckoning with the Past. In response to her sister’s injury, Rena acknowledges that she constantly attempted to ruin relationships by sleeping with committed men. As she did these things, she notes how she would think “sometimes, concretely and deliberately, of her sister, punished for a thing she hadn’t done” (40). Just as the story’s structure separates these two versions of Rena, she, too, attempts to keep these thoughts out of her mind during the bachelorette party and her present life. As she lies to Dori about JT’s whereabouts, she continues to behave recklessly. However, after she bonds with Dori in the restaurant while inventing stories about their band, she begins to regret her actions. As she confesses the truth to Dori, she also reveals that her sister was shot, allowing her past into her present. It is not until the conclusion of the text, as the two spend their day together at the water park and Rena experiences “genuine joy” (47), that the two plots converge. Rena thinks about going to a water park with Elizabeth when they were younger, when “the whole world was in front of her,” with the phrase “wish you were here” repeating in her mind (49). With these thoughts, Rena makes the first steps toward reckoning with her trauma rather than running away from it.

Evans uses Rena to explore and subvert the Jezebel stereotype in literature. This stereotype portrayed Black women h as “seductive, alluring, worldly, beguiling, tempting, and lewd” in classic, white literature (“The Jezebel Stereotype.” Jim Crow Museum). This stereotype—along with that of the Black man as sex-crazed and a brute—was used to justify the enslavement and oppression of Black people, as it situated Black women as inferior and needing to be controlled by the white population. Rena evokes this stereotype in her history of seeking out married men for the excitement and ruin it brings on their relationships. She uses lewd diction to describe her memories, explaining how she would “palm a man’s crotch” or “[tuck] their husband’s penis back into their boxers” as he went to see his wife (40). Her actions and her unapologetic memories reveal her “seductive” and “tempting” side, while her job as a traveling journalist who met JT while traveling in Ghana portray her “worldly” side. While the Jezebel stereotype is racist and endangers Black women, Evans portrays Rena in this way to reclaim it. First, she gives Rena agency, as she takes pride in her actions and her power to seduce men. Even if her actions aren’t kind, they give Rena a sense of control in a world full of senseless violence. With this, her sexual conquests exemplify the theme of the Manifestations of Grief. As Rena grieves her sister’s shooting—and importantly, her inability to face Elizabeth—she finds comfort and power in extramarital and even dangerous sexual encounters.

The complexities of Rena’s character also explore the theme of Intersectional Discrimination: Skin Color and Gender. Throughout the text, the conflict between Rena and Dori shows how Rena is discriminated against due to her gender and skin color. Dori distrusts Rena, assuming that Rena and JT had a sexual relationship in Ghana though they did not. Throughout the bachelorette party, Dori has one of her bridesmaids spy on Rena while acting coldly toward her. She also becomes visibly relieved when she learns that Rena slept with Michael. In other words, Dori views Rena as a Jezebel, there to ruin her marriage and seduce her fiancé. However, these assumptions are only possible so long as the girls remain strangers to each other. They bond on their road trip, each learning new things about the other, and Dori ultimately chooses her day at the water park with Rena over returning to Indiana to marry JT. This ending suggests new ways of relating and moving through the world, prioritizing honest relationships between women rather than viewing each other as competition or tearing each other down through racist and sexist stereotypes.

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