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Ted Kooser

Tattoo

Fiction | Poem | Adult | Published in 2003

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Literary Devices

Form and Meter

“Tattoo” is a 15-line poem written in free verse. The line lengths are fairly even and contain between 9 and 11 beats, but they do not employ a consistent pattern. There is no rhyme in the poem, nor does it employ stanza breaks. It uses an observational and unreliable narration by an unknown speaker. The speaker has no immediate connection to the subject, an old man sporting a tattoo wandering a “yard sale” (Line 10). The poem uses the informal diction of conversational speech and does not make any literary allusions. The poem creates movement by mixing the speaker’s straight-forward visual descriptions with imaginative leaps regarding the motivations and feelings of the subject. This specific juxtaposition is critical for creating the emotional charge of the poem. The speaker offers an objective observation then peppers in an assumption regarding motivation or emotion every third or fourth line.

Visual Imagery

The poem relies heavily on imagery appealing to the reader’s sense of sight. This is strategic because the speaker’s visual notations create a defined sense of realism. Due to this, the reader tends to regard the speaker’s more subjective observations regarding the man as verisimilitude. The rendering of the tattoo is very specific—“a dripping dagger” (Line 2) that goes through a “shuddering heart” (Line 3). This typical heart and dagger tattoo can easily be visually conjured up. It is recognizable and familiar. This specificity makes us believe the speaker’s assumption that the man got the tattoo as a “statement” (Line 1) because “vanity once punched him hard” (Line 5). The speaker correctly observes that the man is “old” (Line 13), enhanced by the description of his “bony old shoulder” (Line 4) under his “rolled up” (Line 12) t-shirt sleeves. Because of the accuracy, when the speaker notes the man rolls his sleeves to “show us who he was” (Line 12), this observation is treated as accurate. The speaker tells us that the man “looks like” (Line 6) a person you “had to reckon with” (Line 7), suggesting by the word “had” a shift to a previous incarnation of the man. The speaker then compares the younger version of the man to a familiar animal—a “stallion” (Line 8). Because of the visual correlation to the recognizable horse, we assume that the “strong” (Line 8) and “ornery” (Line 8) nature of the horse can be emotionally applied to the man. Setting the poem specifically at a familiar small-town event adds to the realism. It is easy to picture the older man with the tattoo at the morning “yard sale” (Line 10) as he “walks between the tables” (Line 10) and examines the “broken tools” (Line 14). All this visual clarity makes it seem truthful when the speaker concludes that the heart of the man has “gone soft and blue” (Line 15), something that cannot possibly be seen. Without the sharp accuracy of visual imagery, the poem’s imaginative emotional leaps would not be successful.

Unreliable Narration

Unreliable narration adds to the impact of this poem. The entire character analysis of the old man is drawn by the unknown observer. Objectively, the only thing the reader knows of the speaker is that they are at the “yard sale” (Line 10) and that they see an old man in a “tight black T-shirt” (Line 11) and with an exposed tattoo wandering around, looking at “broken tools” for sale (Line 15). Subjectively, how the man is viewed tells us about the speaker’s own concerns. The emotional “statement” (Line 1) the tattoo supposedly makes is a conclusion imposed by the speaker, who creates the remaining narrative of lost love and vanity. Since the tattoo is “now just a bruise” (Line 3), it is the speaker who imagines its original glory, the “dripping dagger held in the fist / of a shuddering heart” (Lines 2-3). Further, the leaps regarding the man’s motivations are purely imaginative. The speaker concludes that the man feels “punched” (Line 5) by “vanity” (Line 5), that the “ache lingered on” (Line 6), and that the man’s heart is “soft and blue” (Line 15) in consequence. It’s the speaker who judges that the man rolled his shirt sleeves to “show us who he was” (Line 12) rather than for comfort or fashion.

In the “chilly morning” (Line 9), the speaker is drawing conclusions about betrayal and heartbreak. Although this is never directly addressed, the person actually dealing with heartbreak is the speaker. The old man may be long past caring about his lost love—he’s never asked directly about his tattoo—whereas the speaker must have some internal motivation for drawing the conclusions they do from their observation. In this way, Kooser layers the poem with two narratives: the man’s and the speaker’s.

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