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Pat Mora

Old Love

Fiction | Poem | Adult | Published in 2010

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Symbols & Motifs

Old Testament Prophet

The speaker compares their grieving uncle to “a prophet in the Bible” (Line 3), “shaking his head” (Line 6) as if in disbelief that God would allow pain and suffering. Old Testament prophets, such as Ezekiel and Jeremiah, witnessed some of the darkest periods in the history of ancient Israel (invasions by foreign invaders, mass casualties in brutal warfare, exile from ancestral land), yet they had to accept that this was God’s will and that He had a plan for His chosen people. One can easily imagine them looking at the sky and asking why but receiving no answer other than their faith. In a similar image, the speaker witnesses their “quiet uncle raising his voice / to silence” (Lines 9-10). This silence may signify the absence of God’s response to the sorrow of the faithful or the absence of the deceased loved one’s voice. It certainly emphasizes the loneliness the uncle must feel after losing the love of his life and a companion of 60 years.

Lonesome Tree

The speaker also compares their uncle to “a tree alone at night” (Line 13). This vivid simile suggests that the uncle is solid and strong, like a mature tree, deeply rooted in the love and life he shared with the same woman for 60 years. The loss of that woman, however, shakes him like a storm might shake even the sturdiest tree. His raised hands (Line 2) reach for the sky like tree branches, and his head is shaking (Line 6) as if swaying under the power of an emotional storm. The simile also evokes solitude, prompting the reader to imagine a large tree in the middle of a clearing, no other trees or tall vegetation around him, magnificent but lonesome. The nighttime setting of the image adds to the feeling of isolation. No one is likely to pass by the tree at night, and the sounds are subdued and distant, which makes the lonely tree appear to be in the middle of nothingness. That is the depth of loneliness that the bereaved uncle feels. Another significance of the tree is its role in indigenous beliefs, which Pat Mora references in many poems. Trees symbolize being rooted in the natural surroundings and deriving succor from it, such as healing leaves, sheltering branches, and nutritious bark. The tree imagery in this poem subtly invokes the indigenous worldview that Mora presents more explicitly in other poems, including the idea that we are all deeply connected with everything around us. The uncle’s grief is so profound that for a moment he loses that sense of connection, which is immediately reestablished when he confides in his niece or nephew, the poem’s speaker.

Midnight on New Year's Eve

New Year’s Eve is a time of celebration, when people put the past and its challenges behind them so they can welcome the future and the hope it brings. We sing and laugh and hug (Lines 16-17); at midnight, we kiss our loved ones and wish them well. It is a moment of closeness and happiness. It is therefore very poignant that at such a moment the aunt would look at her husband with “tears in her eyes” (Line 19) because “She knew. / One day, we’d kiss good-bye” (Lines 21-2). The aunt’s tears brought into the moment of celebration the awareness that happiness does not last forever, and that the number of New Year’s Eves they can spend together is limited. In all likelihood, a New Year’s Eve will come when one of them will not be around to kiss and embrace the other. The uncle believes that this intuition, this trace of melancholy amid happiness, is gendered: “women know” (Line 14). The aunt was more attuned to that sense of mortality than he was, but those midnight tears also symbolize her love for him. The poem focuses on his love for her, but this snippet of memory testifies that the love was requited and that their commitment to each other was unyielding.

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