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F. Scott Fitzgerald

Bernice Bobs Her Hair

Fiction | Short Story | Adult | Published in 1920

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Themes

Shifting Feminine Identity in the Early 20th Century

A key issue for F. Scott Fitzgerald as a Modernist writer was the rapidly shifting social norms of the early 20th century. During World War I, women took on new work to replace the men in military service. As a result, women’s suffrage was granted in 1920 through ratification of the 19th Amendment. Along with economic and political shifts, women demonstrated cultural, appearance-based shifts in femininity through shorter hair and looser clothes, forgoing the literal and figurative restrictions of the previous century’s tight-laced corsets. In “Bernice Bobs Her Hair,” Marjorie represents the expectations and desires of Jazz Age women, in contrast to the traditional viewpoints of her mother and Bernice.

The perspective of past generations is demonstrated several times through social censure, which Marjorie rejects. First, the balcony at the country club dance is full of matrons who are there to oversee “proper” behavior. However, at this event and others like it, Marjorie disappears. By escaping watchful eyes, Marjorie not only frustrates suitors like Warren but also rejects the matrons’ ability to supervise, and thereby control, her behavior. Marjorie knows that those with traditional standards disapprove of her independent actions, as she reveals to her mother after the opening party: “I’ll bet she consoles herself by thinking that she’s very virtuous and that I’m too gay and fickle and will come to a bad end” (362). This response makes it clear that Marjorie finds fault with such criticism, but none with her own actions. She is similarly firm in rejecting her mother’s conciliatory views. Marjorie ignores her mother’s advice and gives up on explaining her perspective: “People over forty can seldom be permanently convinced of anything” (363). Though standards for women’s behavior are based on generational norms, as this comment indicates, they are not exclusively bound by age. Not only does Marjorie know women her own age who criticize her behavior, but the contrasting expectations are the basis of her conflict with Bernice.

Bernice’s uncertain traditional approach is a counterpoint to Marjorie’s confidence in her modern identity. At first, Bernice aligns with that “virtuous” perspective that Marjorie dismisses. As a result, she struggles to connect with Marjorie, who has “no female intimates” because she “consider[s] girls stupid” (360). Fitzgerald presents this contrast in a way that expresses pity for Bernice’s isolated situation but also satirizes her standards for what constitutes femininity. As Bernice experiences the pleasures of popularity once she embraces Marjorie’s advice, Bernice’s grip on her conservative values loosens. She gains confidence and social independence. However, when Bernice realizes her relationship with Warren has hurt Marjorie, she feels “suddenly and horribly guilty” (374), indicating that abandoning her old-fashioned views of femininity didn’t equate to abandoning her integrity. Cutting her “long voluptuous” hair, which hangs “in a dark-brown glory down her back” (377), represents the ultimate act of rejecting traditional femininity. Yet it doesn’t result in a feeling of liberation for Bernice because the act is motivated by peer pressure, not by a true belief that a bob haircut symbolizes feminine empowerment. Instead, cutting off Marjorie’s braids becomes the act of empowerment that liberates Bernice. It symbolizes her rejection of society telling her how she must look and act to be accepted as something she inherently is—feminine.

Downfall Through the Temptation of Social Acceptance

In the Western tradition, temptation and downfall are concepts as old as Adam and Eve’s banishment from the Garden of Eden. In literature, the temptation of either social rebellion (often via sexual liberation) or social acceptance (often via standardized norms for beauty and manners) was of special interest in the 19th and 20th centuries. In “Bernice Bobs Her Hair,” several characters face the consequences of social performance, but none more so than Bernice.

Social policing is demonstrated throughout the story. At the opening dance, “[t]here, for example, were Jim Strain and Ethel Demorest, who had been privately engaged for three years. […] Yet how bored they both looked” (357). Though clearly individually unsatisfied, this couple is bound together because marriage is the expected aim for young people, and a broken engagement would be socially unacceptable. At the end of the story, Aunt Josephine worries about Bernice cutting her hair because of the social ramifications. She asks Bernice, “[W]hat’ll Mrs. Deyo think tomorrow night?” and “what’ll your mother say?” (378-79), emphasizing others’ discomfort over Bernice’s feelings about her own hair. Additionally, Aunt Josephine’s response shows how social acceptance can be unwinnable. While the young people throughout the story admire Bernice’s plan to adopt a modern fashion and bob her hair, Aunt Josephine indicates that the same action is unacceptable to older women, the keepers of traditional propriety. Aunt Josephine also has a downfall since she will be judged for her failure as Bernice’s guardian and because she failed on a personal moral level to understand and help Bernice.

Temptation and downfall are, of course, most central in Bernice’s journey. Though Bernice does not directly state why she agrees to follow Marjorie’s advice, she alludes to a desire for increased popularity: “But if you’ll tell me why your friends aren’t—aren’t interested in me I’ll see if I can do what you want me to” (366). Following her agreement, she feels momentary triumph when men want to talk and dance with her. The additional temptation to trade her personal standards to keep their approval leads to Bernice’s downfall in cutting her hair and losing everyone’s regard. Marjorie turns on Bernice because Bernice has followed the social norm of courtship but, as a result, “had gotta hold a Miss Marjorie’s best fella” (373) and won Warren’s attention. Marjorie then sets Bernice up to fall by turning social expectations against her. When their group demands Bernice follow through in entertaining them and getting her hair bobbed, Bernice cannot resist. Though Marjorie betrays her, Bernice willingly follows the path to this downfall, as is often true in temptation stories.

Detachment in Modern Relationships

Fitzgerald’s life as well as his writings frequently dealt with the struggle to maintain meaningful relationships despite personal and social barriers. As beauty and performance were celebrated in the Jazz Age, questions arose about the cost of changeability and the masking of emptiness. In “Bernice Bobs Her Hair,” Marjorie and Warren embody these issues, as do their peers.

Warren and Marjorie trade flirtations, with Bernice as the collateral damage. The story opens with Warren lamenting that while he is “crazy about” Marjorie, she is carelessly “sure of him” and shows no inclination to commit or hide the attention she receives from other men. Marjorie is frequently literally detached, with numerous “disappearances” at parties (371). Besides hinting at scandalous behaviors, this habit is part of Marjorie’s insistence on physical, as well as emotional, independence. Though these facts are presented, the quoted sections are the strongest language applied to their feelings. There is no indication that Warren or Marjorie love each other or have reasons, beyond their familiarity as neighbors, to defend their relationship.

Only when Warren tries out his own “test” of courting Bernice does Marjorie decide to assert her claim on his attention. In the climactic ordeal, neither shows any loyalty to Bernice either. Marjorie sets Bernice up to have her hair cut and later falls asleep with “an untroubled conscience” (380). Warren is silent and only “stare[s] abstractedly” at Bernice. In the fallout from these choices, Bernice receives the most direct social criticism, but Marjorie (with her own shorn hair) and Warren (with the braids on his front porch) likely will have to answer awkward questions. Overall, the audience is left with a sense of incompleteness and dissatisfaction, which Fitzgerald emphasizes as a shared experience in these detached relationships.

The purposeless posturing and obligatory but unfulfilling attachments are shared by the society of this story. At the opening dance, to explain why young men do not like being stuck dancing with one girl for too long, Fitzgerald writes, “[Y]outh in this jazz-nourished generation is temperamentally restless” (359). He thus presents “restlessness” as a fact of the era, that though marriage is expected, commitment is resisted. Later, Marjorie reinforces the idea that relationships merely are this way and that Bernice is at fault if she becomes stuck in a “tiresome colorless marriage” (356). Therefore, modern relationships, built on short-term satisfaction without deeper understanding or partnership, are presented as unhappy but unavoidable.

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